Scene 1: Blackout, Brigade entertainment. Woman being drowned, killer pushing her into a bath, woman distressed - screaming. Blackout, Engaging films. Women lying in bath, killer pushing her down. Blackout, [Noir] appears whilst we hear the bang of the gun (the killer shooting the woman) followed by dripping of the tap into the bath. Killer walking out, down corridor, into darkness, holding gun. Other credits will be present in this scene though we haven't exactly decided what they will be and where they will go.
Scene 2: Outisde noise - traffic. Panning image of building going up (looks like it is the outside of the detectives office)
Scene 3: radio playing, inside detectives office, mid-shot of detective. Knock on door, radio still playing. Seems quite informal from viewers perspective. Will have props in office, objects which inform us more of detectives personality, similar method as to working out specific target audience. For example, there maybe a cup of coffee in secretary's office, whereas the detective has brandy - stronger, bigger impact etc. (person who knocked on the door is the secretary, haven't planned following scenes yet...)
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